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*bowser singing*
This was a triumph
I'm dying in lava here HELL NO D:
Its hard to avoid my Hammers and flames

Mushroom kingdom
I will conquer ir someday
For the bad of all of you
Except the koopas

But theres no sense saving
Princess peach again
I will steal her
Till lakitus dont fly

So i'm glad i got dead
And for all the battles we had
For the goombas who are
Still Alive

Yeah it doesnt rhyme but you can continue it

And it doesn't match the syllable count.

Ah.Rhyme? :D

roses are red
violets are blue
I can't rhyme
shit fuck poo

I think we should leave Maurice to come up with the End Theme.

I think for the end theme it should just play this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c9x1nTTE ... re=related

Seriously guys, I really feel this guy isn't getting enough credit for this amazing piece of work.

Pyr0saur wrote:I think for the end theme it should just play this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c9x1nTTE ... re=related

Seriously guys, I really feel this guy isn't getting enough credit for this amazing piece of work.

I saw it, i listened it like hours :D. I think the same as you: "I really feel this guy isn't getting enough credit for this amazing piece of work." "I think for the end theme it should just play this"

I don't like it very much.

Maurice wrote:I don't like it very much.

Same here. It doesn't fit the style of Mari0. 8-BIT.

Maurice wrote:I don't like it very much.

May I ask why? I want to know what I can improve on next time I write music. I know the other guy said to make it 8-bit but if it's something else that just generally makes it sound bad, by all means tell me what it is.

I'm not a music critic.

Maurice wrote:I'm not a music critic.

So you don't like it for no reason?

There's nothing original in there, the melodies don't fit, the instrument choice hurts my ears.
The only "okay" part is the last bit with want you gone.

Maurice wrote:There's nothing original in there, the melodies don't fit, the instrument choice hurts my ears.
The only "okay" part is the last bit with want you gone.

Well, just contact the author to "8-bit" it

I AM the author.

RabidJellyfish wrote:I AM the author.

Then do it 8 bit LOL.

RumblezMan wrote:Then do it 8 bit LOL.

I'd only do that if he put it in the game and gave me credit, but he just said he doesn't like it so that's not happening. Plus I don't even like it either.. the only reason I finished it for the contest was because people on the main website liked the unfinished version I posted. So I'm probably not going to touch it anymore.

I would be interested in hearing a new version with Maurice's suggestions, although I still like the original.

many people have differing tastes in music. I like it very much. it does have a couple of sour notes, but other than that, I think its excellent!!

Pyr0saur wrote:I would be interested in hearing a new version with Maurice's suggestions, although I still like the original.

he didn't give any suggestions
I think the music was an awesome idea but some parts just feel off, the melodies are so different that I don't see a way to make it sound good with them both playing at the same time. I'm still amazed that he actually managed to make it that good.

Raicuparta wrote:

Pyr0saur wrote:I would be interested in hearing a new version with Maurice's suggestions, although I still like the original.

he didn't give any suggestions
I think the music was an awesome idea but some parts just feel off, the melodies are so different that I don't see a way to make it sound good with them both playing at the same time. I'm still amazed that he actually managed to make it that good.

Yeah, when I started making it it sounded good in my head, but then I realized the Portal and Mario songs had entirely different chord progressions. So it was virtually impossible to combine them without altering the melodies or having a few bad notes.

"There's nothing original in there, the melodies don't fit, the instrument choice hurts my ears."

This could be viewed as suggestions.

Still Alive in 8-Bit?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=claFcQsTtdQ

a program called FAMITRAKER is perfect for making 8-bit songs

or if you don't like the sound

and if you want further proof it can do 8-bit


check mate ;)

oh, I miss working with trackers a little bit.. : )

just delete the voices from still alive and its perfect

RumblezMan wrote:just delete the voices from still alive and its perfect

yeah I didn't like the voices either But it is possible to have a sort of voice

I remember the guy claiming that he used a technique konami used
(you have to listen very carfully for the "yo"s.) EDIT (or is it go?)

More voice in 8-bit
http://youtu.be/XUZOzEBAIww

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ykclsLmLqQ

USE THIS

SpocKirk wrote:More voice in 8-bit
http://youtu.be/XUZOzEBAIww

S.C.A.T.
seemed to have the best quality

Kip Dynamite wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ykclsLmLqQ

USE THIS

umm why? I skipped about a bit to see if you meant sounds of voices (didn't hear any), but please tell me what this has to do with portal or mario? (we don't want to make it a gigantic crossover here... *stares at that forum of people asking Maorice to keep that mlp hat*).

xXxrenhoekxXx wrote:
umm why? I skipped about a bit to see if you meant sounds of voices (didn't hear any), but please tell me what this has to do with portal or mario? (we don't want to make it a gigantic crossover here... *stares at that forum of people asking Maorice to keep that mlp hat*).

oh.. im sorry.. i wasnt aware that you were the one making the game.. sorry about that.. yeah. it was a HORRIBLE recommendation.

Kip Dynamite wrote:

xXxrenhoekxXx wrote:
umm why? I skipped about a bit to see if you meant sounds of voices (didn't hear any), but please tell me what this has to do with portal or mario? (we don't want to make it a gigantic crossover here... *stares at that forum of people asking Maorice to keep that mlp hat*).

oh.. im sorry.. i wasnt aware that you were the one making the game.. sorry about that.. yeah. it was a HORRIBLE recommendation.

... I don't think you understood what I was saying see I was saying that THE MUSIC must be related to PORTAL and MARIO otherwise we may as well call it super c0ntra br0s of z3lda m3ga adv3nture mari0 bros turbo I wasen't being mean I just didn't see how it was related to anything... also it just seemed out of place sinse we were talking about voices in games, and you're right I'm not in charge of mari0 Maurice is and it's his decision.

Guys, the 8-Bit Portal songs need to sounds like the original Mario Bros theme..