Super Edwin Br0s 2 [SE]

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Superedwinbros55
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Post » 22 Mar 2015, 23:45

Hi am Superedwinbros55
and i want to welcome to Super Edwin Br0s 2
i may forget the screen shot of SEB2 but here the web https://mobile.twitter.com/superedwinbr ... 075712?p=v
and here a trailer
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Superedwinbros55
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Post » 22 Mar 2015, 23:46

Coming soon in late april

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Post » 22 Mar 2015, 23:50

by the way the other topic that say super edwin br0s 2 SE is a mistake so sorry :(

Superedwinbros55
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Post » 22 Mar 2015, 23:56

thank you saso

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Polybius
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:21

WARNING
I'd like to warn people about the map pack. It might be a virus since from the video, on his desktop, I see spyware. Vosteran, hijacks your browser and basically pretends to be google, but its horrible compared to google. so please be cautious of what you download and install from this user.

Superedwinbros55
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:24

i sorry i not a bad person it that a person trick me a got the virus blame minecraft

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:25

I wish I could downvote posts right now.

Superedwinbros55
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:26

can you please i sad im so sorry

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:28

the pack is moved into the futute not in late april

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FuriousTH
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 00:28

Killer is hilarious
And please don't make double posts

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 03:08

Might want to use printscreen for the screenshots and a video capturing program for the trailer instead of actually camera capturing your computer.

No fucking clue what the fuck the 2 people who posted were fucking thinking not linking to this but
Obligatory
Re: Setting up your mappack thread properly THE FIRST TIME

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 10:40

The trailer is awful, its use a physical camera, and the "rated E for everybody" is... well, that was bad and don't look like the one from ESRB.
And ESRB's rate is not made for mods or mappacks, its only for big games.
Physical camera is for facecam, and not used for screen-recorder.

When is said "New bosses", these "bosses" don't look like a real bosses, but like a normal enemies, and there have white things around the "boss", look like you using MSPaint, or another image editor but you don't know how to remove white things, and the other enemies, its look like you copied the texture from other people's mod.

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 20:37

This trailer looks just fucking awful, Your voice sounds childish, you used a physical camera instead of recording software, you added a fake E for Everyone logo, and to be honest, why the hell do you even need it? The new bosses and enemies just look like they were ripped from something else or are just recolored but with a white background, there are grammar errors everywhere, and you appear to have some malware/spyware/adware/virus/whatever thing on your desktop that appears to be Vosteran, a software that impersonates Google and fakes it.

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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 20:56

villager you're being redundant ♥
The mappack is a 11/10 good job I want super Edwin bros 3 maybe we'll find out who Edwin is

Superedwinbros55
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 22:53

maybe you right people the trailer suck bad because i don't have the right tool for it

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FuriousTH
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Post » 23 Mar 2015, 23:21

Recorder programs:
Bandicam
Fraps
Camtasia Studio
and others, no your camera
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MM102
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Post » 24 Mar 2015, 03:03

First off,
don't worry about these guys, half of them can't make a decent mappack themselves. I commend you on how much work you've put into the video of your map. You have high ambitions and thats a good thing.

Judging on your desktop you have a lot of spyware/malware installed for one so people might not download your mappack in fear of getting it ourselves. Maybe try to get a trusted antivirus software like avast and run a full system scan or something. Another thing is you seem to be posting short posts one after another here which is generally frowned upon, so try not to do that in the future.

Now for your actual video,
I'll start by saying the obvious that you might not want to use a camera in the future; instead use Bandicam, or Fraps. These are both free and easy to use and is a much better step up from a camera and I'm sure theres plenty of videos on youtube to help you if you need it.
Another thing I noticed is you're using the Super O' Brothers tileset without asking. I'm not sure if the author wants anyone using his tileset so you might want to ask him or check here for tilesets anyone can use.
Finally I see you are using paint to make your enemy graphics which you shouldn't do because it leaves the white border on your enemy. Try using a more advanced image editor like Paint.net because it suports transparency. There should be videos online for this too.

This is all I have to say for now. Try to improve but good job so far :)

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Wary
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Post » 06 Apr 2015, 04:02

Sorry to break my break (yes, you read that right) but I am pretty sure it's impossible to catch a virus from a mappack.
Unless the malware was specifically created to get native code execution from a text file (which is then loaded by Mari0, which I highly doubt of) and is able to escape Löve's sandbox (which I also doubt), you can't get infected from this.
Worst case scenario the malware created exe files that has the text file icon to trick you that its a text file, but then its still imposible to get infected from it because Mari0 (nor Love) can execute exe files. Unless you pulled a ['i dont check the shit i download'] and decided to open the false 'text' files for some reason.

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Post » 13 Apr 2015, 01:21

I literally made this video just as an example of what an good, amateur YouTube game advertisement usually looks like.
Yes, take this in any offensive way you want. But it's fact. Not alot of people are going to download a map that is advertised and filmed gorilla styled.
I made this in iMovie. It is a free on Macintosh software. If you own a Windows device, there is alternatives.

I made this in an hour, non stop focusing. Basically, I waisted my time on this stupid thing. And that's my fault. But anyway, here is the video:


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