Afterlife Travels
Hi!! This is my first Mappack, Afterlife Travels is about how Mario's soul was stolen by Bowser and taken to Hell, so Mario must find his way to save his soul, defeat Bowser and get to Heaven before it's too late, but entering and leaving Hell isn't as easy as it sounds, so you must help Mario solve the puzzles and pass each different and difficult level, with the help of a few power ups and you! (And help rescue Toad on the way) Version 1.6 [WIP]
[/url] http://http://www.mediafire.com/downloa ... ravels.rar
The mappack is still in development but this is what i´ve got for now.
Edit: Tilset credit goes to reghrhre and WillWare
Background credit goes to SauloFX,Alesan99,Qwertyman007,Superjustinbros,Mr.Q.Marx?,and me :D
[/url] http://http://www.mediafire.com/downloa ... ravels.rar
The mappack is still in development but this is what i´ve got for now.
Edit: Tilset credit goes to reghrhre and WillWare
Background credit goes to SauloFX,Alesan99,Qwertyman007,Superjustinbros,Mr.Q.Marx?,and me :D
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- HugoBDesigner
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The screenshots were just messed up, actuallyDanny wrote:screenshots???
sorry i just dont like downloading stuff unless there are screenshots
Welcome to the patented Firaga Mappack Rating System.
Fasten your seatbelts, and keep all hands inside the vehicle as we delve into Afterlife Travels
I... I think I just threw up a little in my mouth from playing this...
I mean, it's horrendously bad, enemy spam, fuck all for items (a "few powerups" is a fucking understatement), boss spam, awful tileset (and how it's used), awful backgrounds, if there even is any on most levels, not even some of the levels fucking work. Oh, and the music is ass too, it doesn't fit the theme you've presented here (even though it's not much of a theme). Very minimal effort was put into shitting this out as fast as possible. I don't even think this was even half assed, it wasn't even no assed! Negative asses were put into making this. Next time, put some fucking effort into testing your damn mappack.
This map is fucking awful, and I really do hope you make something better next time, but this gets the Firaga Shitstain Award for absolutely failing in every fucking aspect, there wasn't one thing that makes this better than any other mappack out there. Next time, try looking off other mappacks, and see if you can gather any unique ideas for another mappack of yours. But until then, this is a motherfucking 1/10, a godawful map that I have had the dishonor of playing.
Fasten your seatbelts, and keep all hands inside the vehicle as we delve into Afterlife Travels
I mean, it's horrendously bad, enemy spam, fuck all for items (a "few powerups" is a fucking understatement), boss spam, awful tileset (and how it's used), awful backgrounds, if there even is any on most levels, not even some of the levels fucking work. Oh, and the music is ass too, it doesn't fit the theme you've presented here (even though it's not much of a theme). Very minimal effort was put into shitting this out as fast as possible. I don't even think this was even half assed, it wasn't even no assed! Negative asses were put into making this. Next time, put some fucking effort into testing your damn mappack.
This map is fucking awful, and I really do hope you make something better next time, but this gets the Firaga Shitstain Award for absolutely failing in every fucking aspect, there wasn't one thing that makes this better than any other mappack out there. Next time, try looking off other mappacks, and see if you can gather any unique ideas for another mappack of yours. But until then, this is a motherfucking 1/10, a godawful map that I have had the dishonor of playing.
Obligatory "Don't take it personally she's never rated more than 2/10" post and joke continuation
Firaga, as you can see, i´m still developing the game, and i´ve still got quite a lot of shitty things in it, yes I have to fix the puzzles, yes I have to add a few more backgrounds and other details, but leaving that part away i made the mappack with my little 6 year old sister, she put alot of things in it too, so I can also say that my mappack is a bit bad but i´m working on it, and thanks for your review!
I'm sorry, I couldn't see the "developing game" part, most maps have a [WIP] for the beginning of the thread title.worldwar1 wrote:Firaga, as you can see, i´m still developing the game
I'd be happy to play again in the future, once you fix some things up.
Ok, I fixed a few more things, added a few levels, changed some backgrounds and fixed some broken checkpoints
[url] http://www.mediafire.com/download/2h8op ... ravels.rar
[url] http://www.mediafire.com/download/2h8op ... ravels.rar
Well, you could put a laser, like this :
- Superjustinbros
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I'm not going to add onto a list of problems this mappack has, since Firaga already tore this mappack apart.
So I'll just add one thing: Try to avoid clashing styles together, since you're using 16-bit tiles with 8-bit backgrounds, which is something a few people don't really like. Also, the way you placed the tiles (easily shown in the screenshots) makes them cutoff (something SMW central considers total cancer). Try to make sure there are no disconnected parts of the tiles and if there's no choice but to have them disconnected, find a way to work around the limited tiles so you can avoid cutoff.
So I'll just add one thing: Try to avoid clashing styles together, since you're using 16-bit tiles with 8-bit backgrounds, which is something a few people don't really like. Also, the way you placed the tiles (easily shown in the screenshots) makes them cutoff (something SMW central considers total cancer). Try to make sure there are no disconnected parts of the tiles and if there's no choice but to have them disconnected, find a way to work around the limited tiles so you can avoid cutoff.
ok, I added all the backgrounds, sorry i havent posted recently, here´s the link.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/2h8op ... ravels.rar
http://www.mediafire.com/download/2h8op ... ravels.rar
That isn't very constructive