i finally finished this mappack and if you forgot the story here it's:
please comment at this mappack
the cave[SE]
Why did you have to make a new thread for this.
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MagicPillow
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I'm getting a strange sense of déjà vu...
I was going to do an entry in "Idiot's review corner" for this but oh my god this mappack is so freaking terrible I did not find it worth it.
It has the same exact problems as your last mappack had, only with less lasers and more spikes. Seriously
Bland level design, stupid underwater spike segments, I swear I had to take a forced hit at least 5 times, most enemies aren't a threat, Hammer Bros are put in stupid spots where usually they can just be ignored, and OH MY GOD Learn to fucking english. Your text boxes lacked any form of grammar and I swear you make Mario go so out of character. Mario would never say "Ok I'm ready to kill you".
Speaking of which the ending is such a cliffhanger and I hope there's not a sequel.
The only good things I can say are that the music isn't terrible (but that's only because you stole it from various games from youtube) and that you made a somewhat-neat boss out of a Hammer Bro (but it's just a hammer bro that takes 3 hits and changes colors. More than I can do at least but still.)
Seriously, go play some of the better mappacks that are out there before you try again. You need to find out what makes good level design and what is fun or not before you try making another map. I'm sorry for being brutally honest but this mappack just sucks.
It has the same exact problems as your last mappack had, only with less lasers and more spikes. Seriously
Bland level design, stupid underwater spike segments, I swear I had to take a forced hit at least 5 times, most enemies aren't a threat, Hammer Bros are put in stupid spots where usually they can just be ignored, and OH MY GOD Learn to fucking english. Your text boxes lacked any form of grammar and I swear you make Mario go so out of character. Mario would never say "Ok I'm ready to kill you".
Speaking of which the ending is such a cliffhanger and I hope there's not a sequel.
The only good things I can say are that the music isn't terrible (but that's only because you stole it from various games from youtube) and that you made a somewhat-neat boss out of a Hammer Bro (but it's just a hammer bro that takes 3 hits and changes colors. More than I can do at least but still.)
Seriously, go play some of the better mappacks that are out there before you try again. You need to find out what makes good level design and what is fun or not before you try making another map. I'm sorry for being brutally honest but this mappack just sucks.
Don't be sorry for being brutally honest, that's the whole point of being brutally honest.
I'll totally back up what Idiot's saying. Really. We've been telling him this stuff over and over and nothing ever changes. I think he should be sorry just for having yet another person try to explain why these are terrible.
Oh and this duplicate thread thing seems like a problem.
I'll totally back up what Idiot's saying. Really. We've been telling him this stuff over and over and nothing ever changes. I think he should be sorry just for having yet another person try to explain why these are terrible.
Oh and this duplicate thread thing seems like a problem.
